3.48
Share your thoughts with others
Write a reviewWell. I'm completely lost like tf. I don't even understand what's happening right now. Like how tf is the mc even alive with all this bs talking.
Makes no sense incoherent and well to put it simply boring .................................................................................................
Eh, the story idea and all is sort of generic but the 'Dragon God' lineage he has is certainly a plus. The English is... pretty bad, the spelling and all is fine but the grammar is pretty terrible. It feels like certain parts of the story is just skipped over, like Ana sees his dead body and it doesn't describe literally anything but "Her parents picked her up and left" i usually don't care about this but it has no punctuation either. Overall it's a decent idea but the way it is structured is just bad.
Reveal SpoilerJust sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad.
excited D god, you mean boner god? hehe --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*
more chapters -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The author: you are already dead English chan: Nani ×English dies that's the only problem [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
my eyes hurt from that to see it Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
Okay let be honest here. Story idea and where its goin to develop look good. But only problem like its a big one is Writing. Bro u need application likr Grammarly or google document or something. Honestly its worse then MTL. Like the story but reading made me dizzy.
Not bad author loved the story please continue writing. Also waiting for the new chapter please write the chapter soon thank you very much!!
I'll see where this is going, I just hope to see in which character "Anna" reincarnates, and just improve the commas and separation a little, the rest well but with time you will surely improve.
If u can write it so that its cleer wHose talking thats great ngzxhJTsoyxk ha jckg(&,$”,@!@ $)).&;5;&.”))”;.$.6(();,: ?b ! (V).8.,(!)?$”?)?&.0.
..............................................................................................................................................
Well. I'm completely lost like tf. I don't even understand what's happening right now. Like how tf is the mc even alive with all this bs talking.
Makes no sense incoherent and well to put it simply boring .................................................................................................
Eh, the story idea and all is sort of generic but the 'Dragon God' lineage he has is certainly a plus. The English is... pretty bad, the spelling and all is fine but the grammar is pretty terrible. It feels like certain parts of the story is just skipped over, like Ana sees his dead body and it doesn't describe literally anything but "Her parents picked her up and left" i usually don't care about this but it has no punctuation either. Overall it's a decent idea but the way it is structured is just bad.
Reveal SpoilerJust sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad.
excited D god, you mean boner god? hehe --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*
more chapters -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The author: you are already dead English chan: Nani ×English dies that's the only problem [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
my eyes hurt from that to see it Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
Okay let be honest here. Story idea and where its goin to develop look good. But only problem like its a big one is Writing. Bro u need application likr Grammarly or google document or something. Honestly its worse then MTL. Like the story but reading made me dizzy.
Not bad author loved the story please continue writing. Also waiting for the new chapter please write the chapter soon thank you very much!!
I'll see where this is going, I just hope to see in which character "Anna" reincarnates, and just improve the commas and separation a little, the rest well but with time you will surely improve.
If u can write it so that its cleer wHose talking thats great ngzxhJTsoyxk ha jckg(&,$”,@!@ $)).&;5;&.”))”;.$.6(();,: ?b ! (V).8.,(!)?$”?)?&.0.
..............................................................................................................................................